over the sky
expanse of space
in a vacuum
I cannot die
breathing in a vacuum… you create quite a picture with so few words.
this is good. with more words, there would be no vacuum created
Is that a good thing?
yes- i meant in the imagery. your text, length and word choice support the images they offer.
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